Water World!!!

Splash!! Went the water when Riley hopped in the pool.

When we went to water world we got all excited. Rooms 18,19,20 and 21 went to water world to do swimming lessons.We went in the mornings and then the bus picked up room 21 and 18 then 19.We did freestyle backstroke breaststroke and other ones.

I smell the chlorine from the pools.I grabbed the bars as i went into the pool. I felt the water touching me as i was going into the pools it felt as soft as flower petals.I heard the coaches yell.My fast feet kick as fast as they could.

The swimming instructor said “Do backstroke and keep your arms straight fatihah was as fast as a cheetah. After that we done some freestyle i love to do freestyle because it is easy for me.

I loved to do freestyle because it is easy to keep my arms straight.

I felt happy because the pools were warm.

             Cape Kidnappers

Many years ago there was a māori tribe. They were waiting for the HMS Endeavour to come           and trade with them, they traded fruit and veggies for fish.Then they found a māori man on the boat they said “we need to get him”the māori tribe said.”But how do we get him”.So they made a plan.The plan was to (when they came) give us food then we will get him and when they look we will be at the land.So then they waited until it was the next morning and waited and waited and waited then it was time. They went up and got him and paddled fast. He yelled”help help”.I am being kidnapped” then he got the gun and shot them one by one.He swam back to the boat and they sailed away. He said”that was a relief” and that's why it is called Cape Kidnappers.

Easter Island

• Your story should have a hook in sentence, a beginning middle and end, descriptive words, long and short sentences and capital letters and full stops.
• Your story could have paragraphs, speech and speech marks, alliteration, onomatopoeia and similes.
• Edit and check your story on your own , with a buddy and have it checked by a teacher before you blog.

 Crash there was four men that fell out of the sky called Phoenix,Bison,Kingston and Jake.They went on a trip to Easter Island.We were excited but nervous at the same time Suddenly…… Peel Peel Peel went the banana boat chop chop went the tomato.”Help I am in the trickster tomato”Jake yelled.We ran after him but couldn't get him.The tomato was fast as a cheetah.Then we found a the creepy cave.

  “I wonder who's in there?”Bison answered.So we went in and discovered a person was making a hut out of bananas? So we made a plan, the plan is that we are going to get the bananas and make another boat out of the bananas we found.Then we brought the banana out and Kingston said “this boat only took 10 seconds to make”.

    “We forgot about Jake” Bison said. But then he was chilling out on the beach.”Come on let's go and sail around the sea now”Phoenix said.”But I was just about to see a shark eat someone”Jake said.

 We have too but then someone picked us up and put us in a freezer.

HB fire story

                   Hawke’s Bay Fire

Huge fire sparks State of emergency

Flames horrify residents

Bang went the wonderful house!!The huge house was burnt and buried into the hard ground.The people were sad because there stuff was gone.The fire was as big as a tall tree.”That fire was huge” my mum said.The fire was super big. The big bucket of water was taking out the fire.There was firetrucks,helicopters and fire trucks from other countries.Crash went the house falling down!!

Tena koutou katoa.

No Heretaunga ahau.

kei Flaxmere toku kainga inaianei.

Ko Frimley toku kura.

Ko Phoenix toku whanau.

Ko Hamish toku matuo.

Ko Bobbie toku whaea.

No reira tena koutou tena koutou tena tatou katoa.

Swing Bridge

WALT - use our senses and the 5 W’s when writing

I see a disgusting lake streaming under the old bridge at the Hastings park.I can taste the horrible fish in the dirty lake.I hear birds chirping quietly.I see a photographer taking photos at the rumbling tree.There was a electric eel soaring through the icky lake.”How far is the wonder tree now?”said the photographer.”Click click click” went the dirty camera.He walked across the bridge but suddenly….Crash! went the old and dusty bridge.”What was that?”went the Fishermen.”Help, help in the water”went the photographer.The fishermen tried to fish out the photographer. And down he went, down a terrifying waterfall.But then the wonderful wonder tree saved his life just before midnight.”Finally I caught a fish”the fishermen said.“I wonder if there is more fish”the fishermen said.”why did the bridge break?”The soaking photographer said.”oh here have my fish birdy”said the fishermen.